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Thom Solo
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Mayamoodybaby wrote: Strip for 2020-Jul-29
In the last panel Zöe should be saying "As are your chances". Or, alternatively, "As is your chance" (singular). Either fix would work, though I admit I like are/chances better. :)
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Thom Solo
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Strip for 9/9/2020
Panel 7 - should Zoe be saying "He's a vegetarian." there?
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swmartian
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https://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-09-16Panel four: "What's not so great was it was when we thought Riff and Zoe were dead." should be: "What's not so great was when we thought Riff and Zoe were dead." (without the extra 'was it') ----- Footnote: "Siphaniana n switching places" should be: "Siphaniana switching places" (without the extra 'n')
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tube_rat
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Might be too nitpicky but I think Zoe should ask "can you find Sam?" Not "you can find Sam?" One is asking if he has the ability, the other is questioning his ability.
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randomlanguage
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tube_rat wrote: Might be too nitpicky but I think Zoe should ask "can you find Sam?" Not "you can find Sam?" One is asking if he has the ability, the other is questioning his ability. I think Zoe is questioning Torg in surprise that he can find Sam
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swmartian
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My goof. Nothing to see here....
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garyfritz
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swmartian wrote: (without the extra 'a parallel') Why? "Our" Riff didn't marry any Izzy. It was Old Riff, the "parallel" Riff from the DoR. I think it reads right as it is. "A parallel Riff" married the "parallel Izzy."
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swmartian
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garyfritz wrote: swmartian wrote: (without the extra 'a parallel') Why? "Our" Riff didn't marry any Izzy. It was Old Riff, the "parallel" Riff from the DoR. I think it reads right as it is. "A parallel Riff" married the "parallel Izzy." DOH! You are correct - it did not read that way to me yesterday. I take everything back. 
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swmartian
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swmartian
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Mayamoodybaby
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Strip for Oct 30th, 2020, in panel 6, Torg should probably be saying "Plant-Zombie-Demon".
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