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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:11 pm 
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It had to be #5 --it was the only one that didn't directly refer to Lincoln, therefore it wasn't any of the ones that we had made up.

I did like Llefser's and CCC's this round, although I didn't correctly attribute either of them....

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:22 pm 
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I can't believe that inspiration suckered me twice in a row! :oasis:


Anyway, our next book is The Space Between Us, by Thrity Umrigar. Set in contemporary India, it is the story of two women: Sera Dubash, an upper-middle class Parsi housewife whose opulent surroundings hide the shame and disappointment of her abusive marriage; and her housekeeper Bhima, a stoic illiterate hardened by a life of despair and loss.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2010 5:19 pm 
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:zoe: Awaiting submissions from two of our contestants.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 3:22 am 
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kitoba wrote:
It had to be #5 --it was the only one that didn't directly refer to Lincoln, therefore it wasn't any of the ones that we had made up.


Wait a minute, that doesn't follow at all. In my round, the only entries that did not refer to Sid Halley (and generally in the first person) were Insp's and Stan's. In your round, Stan's Sylvie and Bruno entry referred to neither Sylvie nor Bruno.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Thu Apr 15, 2010 11:06 am 
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Okay gang, here are your choices:


#1 wrote:
Although it is dawn, inside Bhima's heart it is dusk.


#2 wrote:
Dawn. She has been at work for an hour already, washing the linens, sweeping the floors, and doing the preparations for the day's cooking. In another two hours the rest of the household will wake, and then her real labors will begin.


#3 wrote:
The new curtains were a deep gold in colour; a perfect contrast to the furniture.


#4 wrote:
After we finish nashta, after my husband leaves for work, I say to our housekeeper, "I will be down in a moment." This is how the ritual begins.

Next, I walk up to the little room on the second floor that overlooks the courtyard. I retrieve my supplies from underneath the chair cushion. Manoj, my husband, does not like me to smoke; he says the brand I prefer is too low-caste. His brand is expensive and smells of urine.

I never cry here; that is one of the paramount rules of the ritual.

I light a stick of masala incense and count to five, always five, before I blow out the flame. Finally, I light my cigarette. I settle in to the chair and think of nothing at all. Instead I watch the twin streams of smoke entangling, gracefully, and rising to slip through the space between the curtains and escape into the morning air.


#5 wrote:
एक बार जब भारत में एक समय पर.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 11:06 am 
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Awaiting one more submission.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:04 pm 
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The correct answer wrote:
Although it is dawn, inside Bhima's heart it is dusk.

Guessed correctly by inspiration for 2 points. She also correctly identified the author of each of the other submissions.


kitoba wrote:
Dawn. She has been at work for an hour already, washing the linens, sweeping the floors, and doing the preparations for the day's cooking. In another two hours the rest of the household will wake, and then her real labors will begin.

CCC and Stan Cold both picked this one, giving kitoba 2 points.


CCC wrote:
The new curtains were a deep gold in colour; a perfect contrast to the furniture.

kitoba picked this one, giving CCC 1 point.


inspiration wrote:
After we finish nashta, after my husband leaves for work, I say to our housekeeper, "I will be down in a moment." This is how the ritual begins.

Next, I walk up to the little room on the second floor that overlooks the courtyard. I retrieve my supplies from underneath the chair cushion. Manoj, my husband, does not like me to smoke; he says the brand I prefer is too low-caste. His brand is expensive and smells of urine.

I never cry here; that is one of the paramount rules of the ritual.

I light a stick of masala incense and count to five, always five, before I blow out the flame. Finally, I light my cigarette. I settle in to the chair and think of nothing at all. Instead I watch the twin streams of smoke entangling, gracefully, and rising to slip through the space between the curtains and escape into the morning air.


Stan Cold wrote:
एक बार जब भारत में एक समय पर.




So: 2 points for inspiration and kitoba, 1 point for CCC, no points for Stan Cold or for me.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:13 pm 
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I was almost positive I'd get some guesses if I used Hindi.

Translation: Once upon a time in India.
At least according to Google.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:15 pm 
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In case anybody is interested, The Space Between Us is an okay novel but the actual writing is horrible. The first sentence was bad enough, but check out the prologue:

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The thin woman in the green sari stood on the slippery rocks and gazed at the dark waters around her. The warm wind loosened strands of her scanty hair, pulling them out of her bun. Behind her, the sounds of the city were muted, shushed into silence by the steady lapping of the water around her bare feet. Other than the crabs that she heard and felt scuttling around the rocks, she was all alone here--alone with the murmuring sea and the distant moon, stretched thin as a smile in the nighttime sky. Even her hands were empty, now that she had unclenched them and released her helium-filled cargo, watching until the last of the ballons had been swallowed up by the darkness of the Bombay night. Her hands were empty now, as empty as her heart, which itself was a coconut shell with its meat scooped out.

Balancing gingerly on the rocks, feeling the rising water tonguing her feet, the woman raised her face to the inky sky for an answer. Behind her was the lost city and a life that at this very moment felt fictitious and unreal. Ahead of her was the barely visible seam where the sea met the sky. She could scrable over those rocks, climb over the cement wall, and reenter the world; partake again of the mad, throbbing, erratic pulse of the city. Or she could walk into the waiting sea, let it seduce her, overwhelm her with its intimate whisperings.

She looked to the sky again, searching for an answer. But the only thing she could hear was the habitual beating of her own dutiful heart . . .

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:23 pm 
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Stan Cold wrote:
I was almost positive I'd get some guesses if I used Hindi.

I was 99.99% convinced (it seemed like something Llefser would choose!) but then I was trying to figure out whose openings were whose, and the first one didn't sound like anyone's style so I chose it.

I'll be honest, I kind of love my smoking-porn opening, even if it didn't fool anyone.

This game was so fun! Anybody up for another round? Any tweaks we should make now that we're into it? Did kitoba's idea of two books jumbled work well? (I think it did.) Is this game the worst one I've ever invented? Discuss.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:31 pm 
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I think that this game is easier to guess the correct answer than in regular balderdash, because writing style matters so much more in this game (dictionary style is relatively uniform, and thus easier to emulate). As you wrote in your post, the trick is to look for the entry that doesn't appear written in anybody else's style.

On the other hand, this game was more fun for me than standard balderdash because it offered the chance to be creative with style, both in writing your entry and in guessing your opponent's. Future games would probably work better with more players, but also if we awarded points for guessing who wrote which entry as we did during kitoba's round. I'm undecided as to whether doing two books and two entries per round works well or not.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2010 5:54 pm 
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I thought your opening was fantastic, insp... the only reason I didn't guess it was because it was TOO good. I knew Llefser wouldn't quote the real one at such length, particularly with all those specific details. So that was how I identified you as the author! How'd you sniff me out on mine?

I've really enjoyed this game a lot --one of my all time favorite WGARS games in fact --but I'd rather have a few more players before doing another round. Maybe we should let it rest a little and then try it again.

On the plus side, I finally fooled someone with this round! And actually my entry wasn't too far from the real one, given that I've never read it.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:27 pm 
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I came stone last. I think that's because I'm no good at recognising styles.

Especially in such short pieces. Still, I had fun, and my immediate response to finding out that this game stops after only one round is "why?"

Stan, your Hindi one was - well, it was too obvious. It was the second one I eliminated from contention (after eliminating my own one).

Unfortunately, it turns out that the third one I eliminated from contention was the real one... nonetheless, thanks for voting for me, Kitoba. That means I only lost by half a point.

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inspiration wrote:
This game was so fun! Anybody up for another round?


Yes.

inspiration wrote:
Any tweaks we should make now that we're into it?


Yes; consistency on the matter of guessing who wrote what phrase. Kitoba was the only one to give points for that, which means he was the only one who didn't get points for that (even I managed to scrape up one or two, despite a two-point penalty for trying to claim the points for guessing my own dashes - not that I'm complaining, Kitoba was lavish with the bonuses as well).

So, all in all, I think it would be fairer if everybody scored that in the same way. Since I'm really really bad at guessing who wrote what, I propose that the standard scoring be: two points for the correct answer, one point if someone guesses your answer, and one point if you get all the names right. That still rewards getting all the names right, but doesn't penalise me too much for never getting most of them right.

inspiration wrote:
Did kitoba's idea of two books jumbled work well? (I think it did.)


Well, I don't think it worked badly; I think that it worked, from that standpoint, as well as any other round. Kitoba awarding so many points for attributions and never getting points for attributions did kind of unbalance the scoring system, though.

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Is this game the worst one I've ever invented? Discuss.


No.

I mean, no, it's not the worst game you've ever invented, not no I won't discuss, because after all I am already discussing so claiming that I wouldn't discuss would be kind of counterproductive at this juncture, don't you think?

Well, actually... I'm not even sure of that. I mean, it's a very good game, and very high-quality, but what other games have you invented? Off the top of my head, I can think of The Easiest 100gp, down in FRPG, but that's an entirely different sort of game, right? And I'm enjoying them both, and I think I'm enjoying the Easiest 100gp more, so that means that of those two games this one is the worst, but that doesn't mean it's bad, no, on the contrary it sets a very high standard indeed, and so while I suppose it is possible that this is the worst game you've ever invented I rather doubt it, because it does after all set such a high standard, but then again I do have evidence that you are quite capable of meeting and exceeding that high standard, so if every game that you've ever invented previously does meet and exceed the high standard set by Bookerdash, then technically Bookerdash would be the worst game you've ever invented, but it's still a pretty good game nonetheless.

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 12:57 pm 
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I certainly wouldn't mind going another round. And if we did a full round using kitoba's rule additions (two books at once, bonus points for guessing the others' entries) it would make up for having fewer participants!

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 Post subject: Re: Bookerdash
 Post Posted: Tue May 04, 2010 7:03 pm 
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Let's play another round --insp?

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