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 Post Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2020 2:24 pm 
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Mayamoodybaby wrote:
Strip for 2020-Jul-29

In the last panel Zöe should be saying "As are your chances".

Or, alternatively, "As is your chance" (singular). Either fix would work, though I admit I like are/chances better. :)

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 Post Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2020 11:31 am 
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Strip for 9/9/2020

Panel 7 - should Zoe be saying "He's a vegetarian." there?

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 Post Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2020 5:44 pm 
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https://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-09-16

Panel four:
"What's not so great was it was when we thought Riff and Zoe were dead."

should be:
"What's not so great was when we thought Riff and Zoe were dead." (without the extra 'was it')

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Footnote:
"Siphanianan switching places"

should be:
"Siphaniana switching places" (without the extra 'n')

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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2020 12:08 am 
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Might be too nitpicky but I think Zoe should ask "can you find Sam?" Not "you can find Sam?" One is asking if he has the ability, the other is questioning his ability.

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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2020 5:08 am 
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tube_rat wrote:
Might be too nitpicky but I think Zoe should ask "can you find Sam?" Not "you can find Sam?" One is asking if he has the ability, the other is questioning his ability.

I think Zoe is questioning Torg in surprise that he can find Sam

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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2020 10:10 am 
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https://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?ch ... 2020-09-28

Riff should say "I'll just stay here, thank you," not "I just stay here."

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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2020 4:25 pm 
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My goof. Nothing to see here....


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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2020 7:00 pm 
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swmartian wrote:
(without the extra 'a parallel')

Why? "Our" Riff didn't marry any Izzy. It was Old Riff, the "parallel" Riff from the DoR. I think it reads right as it is. "A parallel Riff" married the "parallel Izzy."

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 Post Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2020 3:41 pm 
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swmartian wrote:
(without the extra 'a parallel')

Why? "Our" Riff didn't marry any Izzy. It was Old Riff, the "parallel" Riff from the DoR. I think it reads right as it is. "A parallel Riff" married the "parallel Izzy."

DOH! You are correct - it did not read that way to me yesterday. I take everything back. :sam:

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 Post Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2020 5:10 pm 
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https://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-10-07

Left out the apostrophe in "Lets" (panel 3) and "Thats" (panel 5).

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https://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-10-14

Panel 1:
'Till next time!

should be

Till next time! (no apostrophe necessary)

Panel 2:
I think your a friend

should be

I think you're a friend

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https://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-10-22

Panel 8: "Where'd she run off too?"
should be "Where'd she run off to?"

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 Post Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:46 am 
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https://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?ch ... 2014-08-22

I've lost the breaks!

I hate it when my brakes break.

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 Post Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2020 7:56 am 
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Strip for Oct 30th, 2020, in panel 6, Torg should probably be saying "Plant-Zombie-Demon".

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 Post Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2020 5:08 pm 
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Oh, and in the old strip immediately after the one linked in the currently newest strip - this is the link https://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?ch ... 2014-08-18 so the one after that - has in panel 7: "--have just ran out of power." Should be "have just run".

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