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stratplans
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Post Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:49 am |
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GoatChops
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Post Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 1:22 am |
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06/17/10 - Panel 9 "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold OUR location" should be "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold YOUR location"
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LobosSolos
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Post Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 3:40 am |
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GoatChops wrote: 06/17/10 - Panel 9 "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold OUR location" should be "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold YOUR location" Since he's there as well, then it's his location as well. Therefore our location would be appropriate.
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GoatChops
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Post Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:31 am |
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LobosSolos wrote: GoatChops wrote: 06/17/10 - Panel 9 "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold OUR location" should be "Every major villain in this hemisphere has been sold YOUR location" Since he's there as well, then it's his location as well. Therefore our location would be appropriate. True, thanks for pointing that out, however I still think "your" would be clearer =)
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:46 pm |
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Uh, HI Pete! Um, I don't know how to ask this without sounding all grammer gorilla-ish, but... Is it Gandledorf or Gandeldorf? First appearance of "Gandledorf" is Sept. 02, 2002. First appearance of "Gandeldorf" is not until Sept. 24, 2003; but you are increasingly using Gandeldorf as the spelling instead of Gandledorf. Is it Weaselo or Weaslo? First appearance of "Weaselo" is Sept. 06, 2002. First appearance of "Weaslo" is shortly thereafter on Sept. 21, 2002; and you are using "Weaslo" almost exclusively now (now being a relative term). Thanks! Inquiring minds want to know! Um, OK, only I want to know. I doubt anyone else gives a ferret's patootie... [I just cleaned up the NiftySearch transcripts for the last Torg Potter — if it makes you feel any better, we can't type any better!!]
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Bradster
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Post Posted: Fri Jun 25, 2010 12:18 am |
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6/25, 6th panel Torg: as I was saying..."...but, we're not here for the satchel."
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Steavie
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Post Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 12:23 am |
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6/29, 1st panel"a silly female just a dropped test tube" should be "a silly female just dropped a test tube" At first I put this down to bad english on the character's part but it's a translation so I thought I'd highlight it.
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Bradster
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Post Posted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 12:07 am |
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7/1, 2nd boxed-in panel, should be "riding the Ferris Wheel over and over!"
Unless he's actually trying to rid the Ferris Wheel of something, unsuccessfully.
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Mercy Machine
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Post Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:15 am |
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I'm not sure if it's a typo, but in the strip for 2nd July, Sasha says: "Did I act improper?" Using an adjective to qualify a verb makes her sound like an hick. It should be "Did I act improperly?"
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Ijustwanttofly
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Post Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:11 am |
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July 6, panel 5, Deng is hoping to avoid possible top level contamination. Should this be 'de'contamination?
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Galaxy Hunter
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Post Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 11:54 pm |
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I'm no expert, but in panel 11 of July 6th's strip we have Sasha wrote: ...we now have a way in and out of the most guarded installations in the world. Shouldn't it be "installation" instead of installations? Or alternatively: "we now have a way in and out of one of the most guarded installations in the world."
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Bradster
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Post Posted: Mon Jul 12, 2010 12:24 am |
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7/12, last panel: women too stupid to use them.
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Bradster
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Post Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 12:21 am |
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7/13, 2nd panel: the t is missing from "about" in the speech bubble of Tech #2.
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garyfritz
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Post Posted: Wed Jul 14, 2010 9:32 am |
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7/14: 1st panel: "IWhat gives me..." 1st panel: "the doors... and the catwalk... ARE wide open"
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ScrumpyJack
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Post Posted: Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:29 am |
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