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 Post Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2011 4:52 am 
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Comic for June 3 2011

Panel 9: Instead of "gong to" it should be "going to"

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 Post Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2011 12:06 am 
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Comic for June 7: 5th panel should be "...those monsters wilL chase us down..."

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 Post Posted: Fri Jun 10, 2011 1:51 pm 
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In today's comic in the 4 pannel it should be "It looks like the A.I. has always ran the city."

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 Post Posted: Sat Jun 11, 2011 2:54 pm 
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05/24/11 | Panel 7:

Alt-Riff (narrating) wrote:
There's this safety-net around a dimension that keep things like time or dimensional travel from doing too much damage to a dimension's stability.

sic: should be "keeps" (note: 'safety-net' is singular)

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 Post Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2011 11:58 am 
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Today's comic (2011/06/24), penultimate (7th) panel:

6-Pack wrote:
You asked me to to [sic] lean on you over this.


I'm no native speaker of English, but I'd say that second "to" is one too many.

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 Post Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 7:29 am 
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Panel seven of today's strip "We have still have work to do" should be "We still have work to do."

Unless he's talking about making liquor, at which point it should be "We have still work to do."

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 Post Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 8:19 am 
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7/1/11: 2nd panel should be "because it's gotten bigger thaN just you and me"

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 Post Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 3:09 pm 
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3/5/11, last panel, "Diayu" should be "Daiyu"

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 Post Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:27 am 
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Today's comic (20110705):
Young Riff wrote:
You told me when you observe time you locks [sic!] its events.

One "s" too many there...

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 Post Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 5:22 am 
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http://sluggy.com/comics/archives/daily/110706

In today's comic on panel 12 when Riff is explaining to Torg that he 'understand's the nanites, it makes more sense grammatically for him to say that he 'understood' the nanites since he's referring to something that happened in the past.

Utterly fabulous story arc!

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 Post Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 12:32 pm 
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06/24/11 | Panel 7:

6-Pack wrote:
You said you were going to finish your personal-standard R.E.C.A.P. by now! You know, incase you drop a bunch of wrenches on your skull and get rebooted by mistake. You asked me to to lean on you over this, and I can *lean!*

sic: should be "in case"
sic: s/b only one "to" (as previously mentioned by "declinator")

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 Post Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:27 am 
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7/11/11: 3rd panel should probably be "...the hero whose Mark-19". Possessive vs contraction of "who is".

Additionally, ref box 'implimented' should be 'implemented'.

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 Post Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 8:59 am 
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In today's strip, "who's Mark-19" should be "whose Mark-19"

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 Post Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:32 am 
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:zoe: - "Ok, Boys, Are we Done with the Games? Are we ready to talk? Do I Need Find some way to Make You Talk?"
I think there should be a "to" right between Need and Find.

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 Post Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2011 4:08 am 
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07/05/11 | Panel 7:

Riff wrote:
You told me when you observe time you locks its events. You explored so much of this timeline. I thought if I found a small window you /*didn't*/ observe...

sic: should be "lock"

Panel 15:

Alt-Riff wrote:
Let's say, for some unkown reason, your paradox "splits the timeline" instead of ending the world. The story here continues with a new Riff and Zoë, who maybe live long happy lives, until the R&D Wars start. Meanwhile you're still you and your Zoë is still shelved produce.

sic: should be "unknown"

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