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swmartian
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Post Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 2:32 pm |
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Thursday, November 29, 2018: Missing punctuation: In Panel 2: 'which one of us is "better"? is missing the final single quote. In Panel 9: I'm just proposing we all try to be a little better than we are - is missing a period.
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garyfritz
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 12:05 am |
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http://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?cha ... 2018-12-04Frame 2: I assume Bun-Bun wants to "decide" what form it is, not "deiced." On the other hand, in Frame 3 maybe he actually meant to say "Blaaaaa, de blab la bla," but I would have kinda expected "Blaaaaa, de bla bla bla."
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Mayamoodybaby
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 7:43 am |
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Strip for December 4, 2018:
In panel 6, I'm not sure what Bun-Bun meant to say, but it was probably "Gibbering", and not "Gibberig"
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Kar98
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 1:51 pm |
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Mayamoodybaby wrote: Strip for December 4, 2018:
In panel 6, I'm not sure what Bun-Bun meant to say, but it was probably "Gibbering", and not "Gibberig" Also, comeuppance and decide. Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar.
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 2:34 pm |
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Kar98 wrote: Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar. Bun-Bun or Pete? ;-)
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garyfritz
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 4:13 pm |
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Kar98 wrote: Also, comeuppance and decide. Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar. I figured "upcomance" was an intentional and hilarious invention. :)
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2018 4:32 pm |
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Mayamoodybaby
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Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2018 7:46 am |
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December 19, final panel.
"I wish I was more like you Torg" should have a comma.
"I wish I was more like you, Torg"
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2018 2:30 pm |
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Mayamoodybaby wrote: December 19, final panel.
"I wish I was more like you Torg" should have a comma.
"I wish I was more like you, Torg" Also in Panel 2, "noggin" does not need the extraneous apostrophe.
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:23 pm |
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Mayamoodybaby
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Post Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 7:37 am |
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December 26th, second panel.
"'POTUS' has eye's on" should be "'POTUS' has eyes on" with no apostrophe.
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swmartian
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Post Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 3:02 pm |
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Mayamoodybaby wrote: December 26th, second panel. "'POTUS' has eye's on" should be "'POTUS' has eyes on" with no apostrophe. Also in the third panel: "destination unkown" should be "destination unk nown"
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VVK
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garyfritz
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