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 Post Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2018 2:32 pm 
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Thursday, November 29, 2018:

Missing punctuation:
In Panel 2: 'which one of us is "better"? is missing the final single quote.
In Panel 9: I'm just proposing we all try to be a little better than we are - is missing a period.

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 12:05 am 
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http://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?cha ... 2018-12-04

Frame 2: I assume Bun-Bun wants to "decide" what form it is, not "deiced."

On the other hand, in Frame 3 maybe he actually meant to say "Blaaaaa, de blab la bla," but I would have kinda expected "Blaaaaa, de bla bla bla."


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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 7:43 am 
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Strip for December 4, 2018:

In panel 6, I'm not sure what Bun-Bun meant to say, but it was probably "Gibbering", and not "Gibberig"

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 1:51 pm 
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Mayamoodybaby wrote:
Strip for December 4, 2018:

In panel 6, I'm not sure what Bun-Bun meant to say, but it was probably "Gibbering", and not "Gibberig"


Also, comeuppance and decide. Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar.

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 2:34 pm 
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Kar98 wrote:
Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar.

Bun-Bun or Pete? ;-)

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 04, 2018 4:13 pm 
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Kar98 wrote:
Also, comeuppance and decide. Unless Bun-Bun had already been to the rum bar.

I figured "upcomance" was an intentional and hilarious invention. :)

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 Post Posted: Sat Dec 08, 2018 4:39 pm 
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http://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?cha ... 2014-02-18

Frame 3
"Skip has a strong lead brining K'Z'K back"
It should be "bringing".

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 Post Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2018 4:32 pm 
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December 11, 2018

Panel 1: "Afirmative" should be "Affirmative"

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2018 7:46 am 
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December 19, final panel.

"I wish I was more like you Torg" should have a comma.

"I wish I was more like you, Torg"

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 19, 2018 2:30 pm 
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Mayamoodybaby wrote:
December 19, final panel.

"I wish I was more like you Torg" should have a comma.

"I wish I was more like you, Torg"

Also in Panel 2, "noggin" does not need the extraneous apostrophe.

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 Post Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2018 3:23 pm 
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December 21, 2018: Panel 2:

"...genetlemen?"

'nuff said.

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 7:37 am 
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December 26th, second panel.

"'POTUS' has eye's on" should be "'POTUS' has eyes on" with no apostrophe.

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 Post Posted: Wed Dec 26, 2018 3:02 pm 
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Mayamoodybaby wrote:
December 26th, second panel.

"'POTUS' has eye's on" should be "'POTUS' has eyes on" with no apostrophe.

Also in the third panel:
"destination unkown" should be "destination unknown"

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 Post Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2019 7:38 am 
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Last panel: "Did you kill anymore?!?" -> "Did you kill any more?!?"

https://dictionary.cambridge.org/gramma ... or-anymore

(Yes, I know, "British" grammar, but the point is this is not the adverbial use.)

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http://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?cha ... 2019-02-15

Panel 1: "Everyone here **IS** happy to be with us."

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