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 Post Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2020 1:26 am 
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http://archives.sluggy.com/book.php?cha ... 2020-03-04

First panel: Even though they're drunk, I don't think "Torloria's" is right.

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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2020 12:28 am 
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http://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-03-13

Panel 6: "that's quiet the angry mob"

Should be quite

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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 13, 2020 5:40 pm 
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Zillatain wrote:
http://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-03-13

Panel 6: "that's quiet the angry mob"

Should be quite

And in Panel 5: "as fast as I can make em'"

Should be 'em

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http://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-03-26

Panel 5:
"...he just chose to started looking to the heavens."

I think it should be "start"

Also it might sound better as:
"...he chose to just start looking to the heavens"

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 Post Posted: Thu Mar 26, 2020 2:14 pm 
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Zillatain wrote:
http://archives.sluggy.com/daily.php?date=2020-03-26

Panel 5:
"...he just chose to started looking to the heavens."

I think it should be "start"

Also it might sound better as:
"...he chose to just start looking to the heavens"

Also Panel 7:
"Frog I choose your for your pragmatism."

The first "your" should be "you"

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